THE MAYA AND AZTEC CULTRURA
The Mayans and Aztecs had different cultural beliefs, and scientific
advances. The Aztecs were very heavy on human sacrifice; they did all to please
their gods through these rituals. The Maya, not very heavy on this event, made
sacrifices of blood, and only a human sacrifice of a captain of a losing ball
team. The Mayas are also a very scientific group, they studied the stars, and
have an advanced calendar than our own today. The Mayas were obsessed with
time, and studied it through astronomy and their current events. The Aztecs
though, were very warlike, they were expansionists, they conquered neighboring
tribes and forced them to pay tribute. The Aztecs also placed much attention to
the prestige of their warrior males, rather than the Maya, where the city ruler
had glory; besides, the Maya was mainly city-states where city rulers had their
own sovereignty, while the Aztecs were ruled by one sovereign leader.
The paragraph is good, and you used several Adjectives. However, you didn´t use any Comparatives or Superlatives.
ResponderEliminarThis is one case where you could have used a Comparative:
- and have "a more advanced" calendar than our own today.
- Siendo eventos pasados, y siendo los Mayas un grupo de personas, deberia usarse "were" en vez de "are" o "was"
- They did "everything" to please their gods